Tuesday, January 27, 2009

aarzoo- my effort to forget the unforgettable and unacheivable

dhundh chantney lagi, 
aasma kuch nam sa hai
per khush hoon main
baat kuch aur khaas nahi 
shyad teri yaad ka gham
aaj zara kam sa hai......

mausam aur bhi suhaane aayenge
samaa kuch aur bhi rangeen honge
tujhe bhool  jaaun yeh toh mumkin nahi
per haan 
tujhe fir kabhi
paane ki ummeed ka bhram 
aaj zara kam sa hai......

aksar chai ki chuskian lete hue 
kaheen kho jaata hoon
shayad us duniya mein 
jahaan bas mein aur tu hai
maana mein hosh mein nahi
per yeh bhi sach hai
teri nigahon ka woh nasha 
aaj zara kam sa hai......

kaheen door tufaano mein
timtamatey diye si meri chahat 
na jaane kab bujh jaaye
aarzoo, armaan tamanna ka toh
khwab bhi kab ka chhod chala
jeetne ki ummeed to nahi
per haan
haar jaaney ka darr
aaj zara kam sa hai......


kuch halaat badalney mein
kuch zamaney ko badalney ki chah mein
mein khud hi be-inteha badal gaya
yoon toh jee sakta hoon 
yeh behroopiye si zindagi
kuch din ya shayad salon aur
per saare naqaab, sab mukhotey
utar jaane ka darr
aaj zara kam sa hai......


yoon toh dard kuch aur bhi
bardasht ker sakta hoon
per dil tootney ka dard sahne ka sahas
aaj zara kam sa hai......



avis

9 comments:

  1. kya bat hai ladke...poetry...
    good good....
    tarakki kii raah par hai...

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  2. encore............amazin stuff........

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  3. @ antriksh
    thanks 4 the motivation bro........

    @tarang

    thanks dear

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  4. hmmmmm gud hai g...
    nice work..

    this 1 is 4 u...

    Mumkin ho aap say to bhula dijiye mujhy
    pathar pay hoon lakeer mita dijiye mujhy

    her roz mujh say taza shikayat hai aap ko
    mein kya hoon ek baar bata dijiye mujhy

    mere siwa bhi hay koi mozo-e-guftagu,
    apna bhi koi rang dikha dijiye mujhy...

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  5. seriously dude...tum ek ache kavi ban sakte ho..

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  6. @amit sirjee

    thanks sirjee for the blessings and the poem

    @vasanth

    thanks bhaiyya

    i thought ki main already kavi ban gaya.....

    lolzzz

    thanks again for the very motivation....

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  7. really nice ones....for me these are just amazing and precious gift to anyone.
    seriously these poems reflects a different persona of urs.....
    the persona, i think no one has ever noticed.
    yaar the poems are really good, but these sound a bit sad.
    sorry to say, but these poems shows the pain and sadness deep inside ur heart. the feelings u want to share with everyone but hesitates to do so.
    yaar just come out of the sadness.
    just frankly tell everyone what u think about anything. dont let this thought come in ur mind that, "Oh! what will he think about me? what will be his reaction?"
    and if there is anything else, just leave it behind.
    really man this is not the AVIS SEAN I know, or anyone else knows.
    put the joy and zeal of ur personality in these poems also..
    so that these poems shows real YOU.
    The real hamesha hasta hua ABHISHEK

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  8. well there are always 2 sides of a man
    as i wrote in the poem its infact quite painful to go through the agonies...

    but u see it takes a hell lot of strength to sport a smile even in this condition.....

    and thats Avis Sean
    The Bull On Bullet

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  9. superb , i m proud of u, superlike.i want u to write more

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